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for Burning Sands

by Anesor

person pip
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well done on this! The depression and grief are palpable in this little fic, and very realistic. I'm glad she was able to cry, but not at all sure it will have helped. Very sad, but true to life.
person Melrick
schedule May 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A good use of the prompts for a sad story. Nice one.