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for Remembering the Past

by blade-of-the-shadows

person Heza
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was a little sad but oh so sweet in the end. A great, feel good read, something that I needed. Thanks.
person jusme
schedule May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
One of the sweetest, most beautifully done one-shots I have read.
person smint45
schedule May 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was really really sweet!!! I liked it a lot!!!!
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic story! I wish there was more.

I would have actually loved to have read everything from the kiss in the bedroom to the present.

You're an extremely talented writer. It was such a well-written story and such a pleasure to read; there were no spelling errors, no punctuation errors, no grammatical erros, no tense changes...the only thing I noticed was you changed the spelling of Zach's name from Zack to Zach. I only noticed that b/c my middle son is Zach and I spell it with an 'h', not a 'k'. :)

Maybe you could do a sequel: Zeke, Zach, and Jackson's life after marriage. :)
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited!! I just saw you posted a sequel!!! :)
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have two words for Jackson: Bull sh*t. He did NOT have to marry his baby's mama to be a part of his kid's life. I work at a law office and see dozens of cases where people have kids but aren't married, and both parents are entitled (and fight over the right) to spend equal time with the children. And of course there's the requirement for child support. So I don't buy it for one second that Jackson had no other choice. He took the easy and cowardly way out because he was ashamed to be in a same sex relationship. Zeke should have left that piece of trash in the past where it belongs and find a better man. He's a fool for taking Jackson back.