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for The Last Mystic

by rye-chan

schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
really a good beginning. i hope u update soon.
person Jetfire
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor boys, still loving it, and some of it did make me giggle because they are both just ever so slightly awkward and confused. I hope not too much angsty stuff is going to happen, because love the way it is right now. HUgs
person smint45
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really nice start!!!! I like this story a lot!!! I wonder what this pull is they both felt^^And amazing that Joey can somehow feel shans power^^ I hope he will not flip when he discovers the truth!!!! Please update soon!!!!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a terrible cliffhanger to leave us with for the first chapter! Ekes. I hope the idiot who shot Shan's parents is held accountable. I wonder how he will take the news that his parents have been killed. Very sad start. I like this and hope you update regularly.
person Aduial
schedule May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love the way you've started off. And your writing style is nice and smooth, I can't wait to see where this goes. :)
person wolfluv
schedule May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW what an intense start! I can't wait to read how this all goes! read ya laters!
person jusme
schedule May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, good feels....need to follow now.