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for It's in the hunt

by Crosetree

person lalan
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's great. I like how you skilfully you direct the story, which stimulate my curiousity. But it will be greater if the story is longer :)) I think so.
Thanks for your work!
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
too short and not enough details in the sex scene.
person SunnyD
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Like it....interesting enough go multi-chaptered.