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by swansong

schedule April 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Man, this was so sad!

I hate to see Dorian and Jed leave on such a bad note. They love each other and are miserable they can't be together.

I'm looking forward to chapter two. :)
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule April 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this new story of yours! I think Dorian is better off without Jed. If a guy hit me like that, he would be out the door on his ass so fast he wouldn't know what hit him. Dorian is better off without him and I wish he would meet someone else who appreciates/respects/loves him like he deserves to be treated.

Great start!
person adropofink
schedule April 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I'd love to read more. Please do continue....

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