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by Cesca

schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, that first chapter was absolutely delicious! Yummy sex! Good job! xoxo Robin
schedule April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM

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BronxWench,

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schedule April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So, I really liked the story. However, it seems there is a slight tense issue... Maybe it was just me... I am no expert. But a suggestion is that you use was not is. Is implies present. However, someone might come in and say that I am just crazy. But I can't wait for another chapter. :)