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May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, really enjoying story. Quick note that in Chpt 5 you incorrectly spelt 'stole'.
Thanks
Katherine
Thanks
Katherine
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May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
okay that was cute in a way! by the way it's stole for stealing Evan's number. Are you going to go into a little more detail about why Rhys had to move there? anywho... read ya laters
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May 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, hopefully Evan and Rhys won't get into it at Ian's house. lol
I love Evan watching Sandra Lee and Rhys breaking his plans to get laid. lol
Looking forward to the next chapter, Penny! :)
I love Evan watching Sandra Lee and Rhys breaking his plans to get laid. lol
Looking forward to the next chapter, Penny! :)
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused: I thought Rhy was new to town. So how does he have "so many true friends out here"?
Lol! Tuchus!! I haven't heard that since my mom passed away almost sixteen years ago. She used to say "sweet tuchus" to my sister and I all the time. lol
Ok, on to chapter four.
Lol! Tuchus!! I haven't heard that since my mom passed away almost sixteen years ago. She used to say "sweet tuchus" to my sister and I all the time. lol
Ok, on to chapter four.
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Boy, Evan really acts like he's got a stick up his ass. lol No wonder people try to avoid him. I don't blame them.
It seems that Rhys isn't too put off by him though.
Looking forward to chapter five, Penny. :)
It seems that Rhys isn't too put off by him though.
Looking forward to chapter five, Penny. :)
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April 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Heya Penny!
I didn't know you were posting on here too! :)
I don't know how I missed it when you posted the first chapter. But I see one more chapter on here, than the other site, so I'm gonna read it now. :)
I didn't know you were posting on here too! :)
I don't know how I missed it when you posted the first chapter. But I see one more chapter on here, than the other site, so I'm gonna read it now. :)
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April 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far! You posted chapter 2 as chapter 3.
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April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure what is going on in the first chapter but that might be clearer when you get a beta. Is the speaker a human or actually a dog? Perhaps if there was more information in the story synopsis about what it is about, it would help to understand what the beginning "monologue" is about. I would like to say I can envision where this should go but I'm so thoroughly confused as to what is going on that can't offer any suggestions on where I could see this going.
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April 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well that was interesting! So far it's good but I'm sure the next chapter will be even better! read ya laters!