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for Even If He Wanted To

by abeth54

person staar
schedule August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Rhys sure told them a thing or two !!!!! They really need to get to Evan ......man Evan's mom is a don't even know what to call her.....Wonder why she is like that, hope you get to explain that one.....So glad they got back together again and now need to HELP Evan ok !!!!!! BTW thank you thank you again and again for the update....see you next time and hope you get a nice long sleep !!!!
person staar
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG thank you for getting Issac and Molly together again !!!!!!!!!!!!! ok ok ok , I feel a little bit sorry for Ian , but it's all his fault !!!!!!!!!! MG you nned to fix Evan , my poor boy, he is so out of it. Molly and Issac need to go and help him please !!!!!!!!!! Well have fun and see you in 2 weeks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, you need to tell us who is the assh*le who said all those things about Evan ok.........
person staar
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!! so glad to see an update this morning !!!!!! and yes I don't lim Ian cause he's to full of himself and I also don't like he's treatment of Evan for whatever resin...Evan has very deep problems and you know kids are so bad. Rhy is really still a mystery to me cause on one knows him, even thou I know he is leaving in a hell also......So you convince me to like Ian ok !!!!! let's see how you fix it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! see ya soon :):)
person staar
schedule July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG this last update of yours was great !!!!! Issac man he was awesome in the fight, didn't know he had it in him to do that....they both deserved it...I knew that Ian was a prick...but Rhys just sitting there and doing nothing wow !!! Now she's upset cause Issac is going out with that thing, well how does the saying go Revenge's a bi*th....Loved it , I see that you my have a whole different ending of what I'm thinking , buy well lets see his it goes...Thank you for the update, I really can't wait for the next one !!!!!!!!!!!!!
person staar
schedule July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi !!!!! New to your story !!!! I love it so many problems !!!!! yes so like high school , thinking that everything or anything the world is going to end....The 3 friend are a trip to read about, I hope you FIX the friendship again cause it would be so bad of you if you didn't.... and that Rye guy he's don't ever know what to say about him (cute )...Hoping to see an update soon , you got me hooked !!!!!!!!!! see you soon !!!!!:):)
schedule June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story, but your chapters just seem a bit short! Still really good story!
person wolfluv
schedule May 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You know this makes me wonder WHO he will really end up with in the long run... Thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!
person wolfluv
schedule May 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WHOA THAT WAS WAS.... DAMN! I LOVED IT! read ya laters!
schedule May 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Penny, Penny, love the chapter! Ian and Evan are both so cute with their little internal monologues going. lol

Although...I know that Evan was sort of crushing on Rhys at first, did Ian crush on Rhys too? Just wondering.

Anyway, too bad Rhys had to ruin their moment by ringing the doorbell. lol

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Happy Mom's Day if you're a mom! =)
schedule May 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to ask: why does Evan limp? That wasn't mentioned in previous chapters, was it?