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for Even If He Wanted To

by abeth54

person mina
schedule October 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story. Please update soon :)
person staar
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so now he is not talking to anyone !!! great !!!!! can it get any better here ....well lets see what happens next..glad he did that to his so called friends ...see ya soon and thanks !!!!!!!!!
person Reeciez
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well sheesh! That was intense although I'll admit I was expecting more action but what more could I possibly hope for when all the main characters come together? Oh, I can't wait to see what Rhys will do this time. Ian is going to catch him red handed sooner or later so as I always say "out with it, ant!" Why avoid the situation when it is going to be brought to the light eventually?
Go Evan! I'm proud of you for getting through this all on your own even if it hurts. He's handling things how I would, put a brave face on, but is that really the best solution for him? Only time will tell me and I can't wait! No really, update right now. No? Boo.
person staar
schedule September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well here's this maybe Evan can have both of them !!!!!!!!!! thanks for the update see ya
person staar
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
you sure did saying all that !!!!! and not going anywhere...the sister there was so good in telling off Evans friends that I was laughing so much with !!!!!!! thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!
person staar
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's so true , Evans friends need to suffer a bit for leaving him...Also I hope you don't be mean to Rye he has so much on his plate with the kind of parents he has so please be once to him....since I think your going to get Evan be with the other one forgot him name so find someone once for Rye ok thanks for the update and see you soon !!!
schedule August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aaargh you did it again! Left me hanging my fingernails are getting sore. Great work as always keep it going can't wait for more. I really enjoy reading this series and thanks for the shout out. Your a great writer.
person staar
schedule August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok where did Rye take Evan ?????? now he has them all worried !!!!! thanks for the update !!!! hope both of them can get along and like talk !!!!!!!!they both have a lot of problems see you soon !!!!
person hamarasachi@yahoo.com
schedule August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am totally upset at how real life this drama is. And the fact that you decided to cliffe it. in that order.
schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice start can't wait to read the rest