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THAT WAS AWESOME! I'm so glad you decided to combine the two! It makes it so much more! Thank You for updating and sharing this wonderful sexy story! read ya laters!

I cried too. So for that to happen to him twice. Hopefully the next chapter comes out quickly.

Thanks for letting us know. ^_^
Good kuck with moving ;)

Just read the 4 chapters back to back and it is really good! I like your story very much.
Please update soon ^_^

Leo is so selfish and what a coward ! I can't stand him, he is so annoying and imature, wanting to save his own hide and having his servant taking his place to marry the king. I'm sorry but I would much prefer to read Camrion's love story, BDSM and Dom/Sub, so yummy !!!! so I'll wait for Camrion's story, because Leo... well he seems so shallow, and I hate shallows characters. Don't be angry, I'm not flaming you or anything. So please, will you do Camrion's hot and sinnful love story with the king ? it would be soooo lovely !

It's getting much much moree interesting!! Hope you could update it regularly~! :3 can't w8 4 de next chappy~

WOW that was funny! Hee hee sorry but to me it was I mean the whole "ask the price again and maybe he will".... I sort of feel bad for Leo but not because he is used to getting his way. I'm sure the Derrick was just stunned that the one he likes caught sort of him doing things... Well I can't wait to read how dinner goes... Is Leo going to have to serve Camrion at this dinner? OR is he going to have to serve Derrick? read ya laters! Oh and one more thing I was just wondering "fallow" is that part of their language or is it a typo if it's a typo it's "follow" okay. OH and THANK YOU for updating so quickly!

I really like this story and i would definitely love to see a story about Camrion and Murdock;)

I AM TOTALLY DIGGING ON THIS STORY! Just one thing though... Chapter 3 your margins are off could you fix those before you post it again? I wanted to read it but it's hard when it's cut off and you have to arrow right then left to read the sentence. Other wise I can't wait to dig in and read away! Awesome plot so far and beings I can't wait to read what else lives in this story! read ya laters!

Very interesting first chapter, please continue....