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by Melrick

schedule August 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

i... i don't know what to say.

it was just... freaking me out, in a good way of course. This is very good you know. Are you a thriller fiction writer in your daily life?  You should post this on other site as well, like wattpad or fictionpress. I know this site was supposed to take in the most craziest idea but, this kind of writing deserves more appreciation..

person pip
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well done!

I love the way she's so rational about being completely *irrational*. You describe the insanity perfectly. Of course, the gore is great horror too. The SOCO team is going to have a bad day, I think.
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a delicious little bit of obsession turned to action. It makes me wonder why we don't see more of that behavior as it is. Excellent use of the prompts, and a lovely treat for me as a reader. Thank you!
person Mona Thompson
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow...sooooo fucked up!!! I loved it!!! Very disturbing and gory...like most things I love❤️ Good job!!!