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Awesome ch! Kev is funny as he'll.

Gah! I love this story! It's fun, you write the sex scenes with a wonderfully deft touch, the characters are flawed and silly, the plot is a fantastic cliche, and what you've done is create a fun, warped world with humor, sexiness, and an entertainment factor that needs popcorn and ice cold soda. With the mafia, the threat of danger lingers, so your readers know this could turn dark at any moment. But five chapters in, and the main characters (one with a little potbelly - I can't tell you how much I love it!) are getting needy for each other, and there's a nice, if very strange, connection between them that lends hope that this will ultimately have a happy ending. Something much needed after reading Cyber Psychos (I recommend it, but wow, it's dark and painful. Same with Midnight Son - beautifully written but I think I had ptsd after finishing it!). Anyway, you've got a great style, I'm looking forward to seeing how this love affair unfolds, and really hope to see more soon!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

I am so happy that you are still writing this story! I had almost given up hope. I really like this story, thank you for updating :)

I love this story! Update soon - PLEASE!!!

Thanks for the update! Definitely worth the wait! Hope the next chapter is just around the corner! =)

This sporty is so yummy. I love it. xoxo Robin

this is a really interesting plot, and while the subject is complicated you are handling it with great pace!

I love this story and the characters so much, please update:)

Hi! I'm really enjoying this story. I love the way you write. Hope you continue with it.