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June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is stunning. I don't usually read this sort of material, but a friend recommended this, and he was right. It's interesting, distressing, and comforting, all wrapped up in one, and I get the feeling that's exactly what you've intended it to be. The writing is quality, and very descriptive. The play of emotion comes through vividly, so kudos to you for that, because not everyone can pull that off with the skill you have done. Your characters are clear and compelling; sometimes, when I'm reading something, the characters run together in my head, and I'm never sure who's who. Your characters are well-defined, not just in their physical appearances but their personalities. They are realistic and convincing. I'm only on chapter 6, but I'm really enjoying this. Thank you for putting quality writing out there; there's so much slop and drivel to sift through, and finding jewels like this make it worth the search.
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I went to your website and downloaded the whole first book coz' I couldn't take it anymore! Overall I really like the insights into the bdsm scene and how all three tries to juggle the relationship! I think the difference in POV is intriguing as well but for some odd reason, I just don't like Jeff haha he's well created but I keep finding myself skipping his chapters which is abt every alternate chapter... I really like Roman and Dare though and the minor characters! Thanks for the read! Shall consider the other volumes, especially with Jeff getting into an accident and all!
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April 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
reading this is like watching an accident that you know is gory and god help those in it and you just can't drag your eyes away because for some reason it seems you need to know what's going to happen next regardless of it's out come. I want to be mad at Roman but I also want Jeff to not be with him so Dare can be. I also feel bad for Jeff but at the same time not really. Your story confuses me almost as much as Dare... it's not a bad thing at all there were times when I wanted to just stop reading because being a little childish I wanted it to go a certain way and it wasn't but then there seems like there is a chance it might... I was thinking Jeff would hook up with Tristan and then low an behold nope not happening. I like reading how Dare is going down this rabbit hole and reading how Roman is driving this world for him but I also like it when Jeff notices how just maybe Roman might be falling for someone new and finds it scary and informational at the same time. I don't want Jeff hurt I want him to find that happy ending and I feel like I wanna yell at Roman and say make up your mind already but I don't know what's going to happen still and like a wreck happening I can't seem to stop wanting to know what happens next.... read ya laters...
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April 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story, I found it yesterday and haven't stopped reading it since. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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April 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story, pretty intense and different!
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April 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this so far. I love the interaction with Dare and the other two men with Roman. The description is vivid and illustrates the story beautifully. I can't wait to see what happens next. How many chapters are there?
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April 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
...Wow...this story...IS SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!! I love all the characters and their different personalities and of course everything else :3
...I am such a big fan of this story.. I can't wait to read what happens next.
...I am such a big fan of this story.. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is my new favorite story. I love the relationships and just everything about it!
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March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great Stuff. I was instantly captivated by Roman and Adair's chemistry. Then, it seems Jeff and Roman's relationship will add a whole other dynamic. I wasn't sure, at first, reading the second chapter but then you convinced me and made me understand. I'm fascinated! I see wonderful set ups for drama and angst or at the very least a lovely and fresh plot. Hats off--its good, really good.