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for Psychomotor Agitation

by XIX

person Bree
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was deliciously disturbing. I loved your writing style, and your characters. I hope there will be more to follow.
person Quill
schedule March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful in the most fucked up way possible.
schedule March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
There is dark love here, with such honesty and vulnerability that it hurts to witness. Who else writes like this? (hint: no one, trust).
person Kitteh
schedule March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how to say how much I enjoyed this without sounding creepy, I think :/ It was...well, not quite lovely, for the topic and the workings of a sick mind as the killer's can't exactly be called lovely, but I loved the unusual descriptions of situations and emotions. Although very gruesome, there was something like love there. I was a little confused about the liberal use of comma though.