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April 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think it totally made sense that he panicked when Blake grabbed him first and then was comforted by him. Lou probably needs to seek professional help of the mental kind at his point.
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April 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Really I'm curious for the next chapter.
There are a lot of hints in each updates and it makes the story more exciting.
It is a good thing I read this one. I'll be watching out this story.
Good job!
There are a lot of hints in each updates and it makes the story more exciting.
It is a good thing I read this one. I'll be watching out this story.
Good job!
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April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nah I know I've read it before but I know it was never finished, I also know you never quite found out if they were vampires or werewolves or the like. DON'T get me wrong I'm SOOOO NOT complaining! I'm just Happy that you're writing this very funny and plot full story! You give us just enough to wonder what's going to happen next and just enough smex to keep us going! thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The one way you're not satisfying me is the lack of a third chapter. Just found this story and something about it making me want to know more. Really. Lou is pretty much an unknown but something about him is just sympathetic. I hope he stays that way and I really want to meet this blake guy. Besides, I think Rose and the rest are hiding something a lot bigger than knowing how Lou got to the hospital ^_^ Just my gut feeling.
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it. I can't wait to meet Blake... I feel like I've read this story before? Well anywho don't beat yourself up it was a good plot filling chapter! But let your beta know he missed a few mistakes just let them know that the eyes are faster then the fingers! I know because I beta for a couple of people and then re-read the reposting or re-read the chapter and realize the mistakes I've missed. Please keep going on this story and chin up you have fans! Post when you can and thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!
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March 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. Lou really did have a hard life for him to resort in trying to kill himself. T_T
I am really intrigued with Blake! I wonder who he really is. And why haven't the met yet? Looking forward to their first meeting! :)
I am really intrigued with Blake! I wonder who he really is. And why haven't the met yet? Looking forward to their first meeting! :)
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow i'm lovin' the story i cant wait to see what yourgoing to do with it. i'll be checkin back i realy hope to see more!
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March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This first chapter was fantastic! From what I've read so far, this is easily going to be one of those stories that I'd keep a close tab on. Even from just this start, the story flows easily and I got sucked right into its universe. Keep up the good work!!
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March 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm definitely intrigued and looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting start, I'm dying to know which way this rabbit hole will turn. Please update as soon as possible.