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for It Started out so Nice

by whisperwhiskers

person anon-ish
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This more than makes up for it! I was sooooo happy to see the new updates! Thank YOU for updating! I wonder who killed Lou's dad.... Is Lou a hyper too and just doesn't know it? I mean when she mentioned the blood sample and him needing to know well.... OR is he something different? I'm willing to wait to find out get back when you can and THANK YOU FOR NOT ABANDONING THIS STORY~~~!!!!!!!
person abyssdoor
schedule June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Let's see: powerful monster decides to not mind his own business and saves a boy against his will, then proceeds to seduce him little by little and keeps him from trying to escape by dropping some obnoxious fake-smilers on him (who don't seem to be able to mind their own business either), now the boy has no choice but learn to love him or else... nothing because there are no options. It will be another one of those...
person vidalhbea
schedule June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I came across this and wanted to give it a read. I love it.
person vidalhbea
schedule June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, this chapter is so mysterious! I like it! So his rescuers name is Blake huh? Can't wait to see how this pans out. Poor Lou, so much suffering for one so young.
person ramblingrobin
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
person wolfluv
schedule May 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW you some how managed to do it again! I mean I could almost feel the moment when you would finally find out if Lou was like a long lost cousin or some beta from a long lost tribe that has Blake all hot an bothered... BUT that was very cool and different I like what Blake and the others are their not exactly vampires or werewolves but something all together their own and that ROCKS! Nice plot twist and LOVED the whole waking up scene with Lou and Blake that was awesome if not a little short BUT I'm happy it's still going the pace that it is! Thank YOU for updating as always it's worth the wait! read ya laters!
person itrasheditgood
schedule May 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far.
person wolfluv
schedule May 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
TOTALLY FEELING THE LOVE! I hope Toby doesn't get fired for liking Lou but he was out of line... Thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!
person NallaAsh
schedule May 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hehhhh Oh god i love this
person craftingmom
schedule May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just startled reading this and I really like it so far!