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for It Started out so Nice

by whisperwhiskers

person nikkie
schedule November 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! You write with a lot of emotion and meaning. Very well done.
person H
schedule June 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Awesome story! Glad to see you back :^) Sorry for the lack of criticism.I've Just got some praise for ya today.
person Lavi1443
schedule June 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Im so happy the story caught my attention and i decided to read it. Its very well written, i like the storyline so far. The characters are so cute! Especially the main couple, of course :)
Please update again soon! Ill be waiting here eagerly.
schedule June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and the characters! i look forward to reading more when you get around to posting another chapter!
person vidalhbea
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just another great chapter. Hmmm, the plot is thickening. Leloyed sure was up and personal with Lou. That's of way to pass the time.
person vidalhbea
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It seems like everyone wants to protect Lou,but he's being pigheaded. He cares for them! Hopefully he can integrate himself and they can all be a family. Great chapter.
person vidalhbea
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm somethings afoot. Lou made the right choice telling Blake the truth. May his uncles' penis fall off! I'm liking this story . Thumbs up!
person vidalhbea
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uh huh, I bet Lou won't go out drinking anytime soon. Good thing Rose was with him. Finally the mystery is solved! So Blake and the others are hypers. Okay. So did Lou cop a feel?
person vidalhbea
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a shock for Lou. Wonder who murdered his parents.
person Tahn
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story. It looks interesting. Can't wait for more to see what's going on. I wonder if that other clan found out who he was and killed his dad as a message?