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June 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM
It's really great how you fit all the emotion of the loss into so few words. The passage remembering Hannah sexually is very bittersweet, but I love the way the language changes from playing the instrument to comparing playing Hannah.
" It seemed less painful now because they had loved, "
It's like the old saying "It's better to have loved and lost than never loved at all" you've got a great way of putting it.
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June 15, 2019 at 12:00 AM
That was both beautiful and melancholy. Really well done, but then again, every single thing you write is really well done.
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February 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The way you don't mention the guitar was powerful. Touching piece that made me sad. Very well done.