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for Midnight Son

by JennieHaniver

schedule April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love how quickly you update this story. I love how you really explain things like the astral projection. The way kolija was trying to remember the words made me smile and I really feel like I am standing there beside them.

I like how Kolija finds little moments of happiness. At first it seemed like kolija was just excepting the fact that he was a child sex slave, like he thought it normal and then the more you read the more you realise that he knows how wrong it is and he is just surviving.. barely.
It's funny how Alek came to him both times when it looked like he was going to jump.

Part of me wants to kill Alek, he knows it's wrong, he feels the need to protect the child yet he leaves him in the hands of the chieftain.
I still have questions, like what happened to his mother and his sister? Will they suddenly appear to help him?
If something does happen to the chieftain will he go live with the Andersen or will Alek take him or find his mother.

Also does Anna know what is happening to Kiljo? Is that why she gave him the little bunny.
So many questions? I really need to stop reading this before bed. I was still awake at 4am.
Thanks for sharing.
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, but he's too young. Someone needs to rescue Kolja now.
person Nbsiren
schedule March 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad he had a good day^^
person wolfluv
schedule March 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Ms Anderson! The werewolf thing was one of my guesses and I do love me a good wolf story! Also I hope he can visit them again! I can't wait to read what happens next in his life! But I'm still wondering how Kolja was able to alert Alex about his plight? read ya laters!
person wolfluv
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS TRULY INTENSE! I can't wait to find out how Al knew Kolja was in trouble and if he's got some power that Al knows about too? thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!
person Nbsiren
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope Kolja makes it off the island~
person Nbsiren
schedule March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Read it all in one go, looking forward to more^^
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see where this story goes.
person wolfluv
schedule March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Not sure why it's under the supernatural/paranormal section but I'm totally Loving it! This last chapter made me cry! I need a box of tissue now. I'm hoping for a happy ending for this sweet kid really I am but I'll still read it if it doesn't turn out that way too. So congrats on the your first "story" I hope to see it to it's completion! read ya laters!
person guilty_pleasure
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i'm liking it.. I have so much questions on my mind! How Kolja came to be the possession of the chieftain. Who is Alec? Will he be Kolja's savior or another tormentor? My heart goes out to the poor kid because he have to endure so much pain and shame. I'll be waiting for more updates :)