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I felt like I should leave you a review.... Well, I really don't know what to say.... I like this fic a lot, even if its dark and depressing (even when I get lost and don't understand who is talking, I notice this clearly) as hell and I also like your characters quite a lot. The protagonist, brat and happy, above all. Happy us a sadistic bastard like his master but I don't know why I can't really hate him. Maybe because they tampered with his brain and the result is the actual him. He can be loving or compassionate, or maybe that's just me and my wishful thinking.
I also like the route this story is taking.... Well, to tell you the truth I don't know where is this going, but its improving. I wish for the ending to a happy one but I feel that's not going to happen. Or maybe there's a possibility?
Anyway..... To sum up, keep writing, I'll be reading your chapters whenever I see them. And good luck :)
P.S. Sorry if my rew seems weird! :(

Hi! It's me again. Thank you for answering my last review.
Good to know you have already planned the story :). I would like to be your editor.... But I'm not a native English speaker nor I know how to edit, so I hope you find a decent one.
Now that you mention the names, yes, sometimes is confusing to difference who us talking with who and who us doing what, but one of the things I like about this story is precisely the different nicknames the characters have :D. If it's useful for you, I would recommend to explain briefly who is who and what names they have. (or maybe the explanation is enough, who knows. For example,I know who is brat, , ghost/solitude, tattoos, elite, albino and maybe a few more. But I don't know if that's my fault for reading so amazingly fast or because you cause confusion (or both, I'm not sure). The only thing I know is that this will be awesome with a good polish here and there :) it's already quite awesome anyway. Keep it up, and I won't send you more rews until you post another chapter and I have more useful things to say to you. Sorry D:
Keep writing :D

Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! What will it be like when he goes back to the holding room and see's Happy again after this? Will he ever get a chance to be with Ghost again? Will he become Happy's again? I don't know who I want him with more - Happy or Ghost. Does he have a Master of his own? So many questions lol.

What a wonderfully sick and sensual chapter. I fell in love with it. So sad for our princess, but was there real emotion in Smileys eyes? I think so, but am I right or just hopeful thinking on my part?

I'm so confused. Beyond the multi nameless characters with vague personalities, there are things said that make no sense and places where it feels like something has been left out creating weird jumps in the story line. I really like it though, the plots intriguing and I want to know what happens next. I also really want lolli back in the picture.

I am definitely a fan of Solitude and Human Feast but I feel sorry for the brat. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I really like this concept of this, it's different and very interesting and it's a story I can really get engrossed in. I look forward to seeing how the different relationships between Sunshine, Solitude, and princess hair develops. As long as you keep writing, I'll definitely keep reading.