Darla's dad is an asshole
I have read "Darla’s New Beginning" by risa187 and I have to say that it was an extremely remarkable sequel to "Darla's Dad". risa187 did an awesome job and you did a great thing by giving her permision to post it
At the end of this 2nd part, it was looking like Darla was going to have a horrible life like her mother, but luckily everything turns out okay in the 3rd and final part.
This is whati like to call a bad ending. Great job
On the bright side, Kyle and Jay won't be bothering Darla anymore (and their punishment was quite satisfying), but it almost doesn't seem worth it in the end (and the pussy and the mouth…). As bad as her father's abuse was (described so wonderfully forcefully throughout) it's her mother's apathy that makes me feel even worse for the poor little victim. Nicely played.
Great job. Very descriptive i wish you of made a second one rather than leaving it here, but brilliant none the less