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Lovely chapter! Could you, perhaps, put an annotation in on how to pronounce Gaap's name? I am not sure I am pronouncing it correctly. Looking forward to your next update!

Hmmmm...what does that say about Rowan's magic if he was able to summon Gaap then...*waits for more*

I wonder if Rowan even knows the reason why his throat is so sore, probably from all the screaming and moaning he was doing while Gaap pleasured him. I was surprised he didn't end up with a sore bum since it was his first time and walk with a slight limp, LOL.

Oh, no, poor Rowan he is sort of clumsy but I love him anyway. Ouch! Landing in a rose bush must really hurt. ~~~ sends Rowan kisses to make him feel better ~~~

Well, that was very interesting news to find out about Gaap, very interesting. After looking at the painting, I thought for a moment that Gaap might have had something to do with what happened to Rowan's parents but not sure.

I really enjoyed this chapter, good job writing it!

I would love to be able to read this as a graphic novel! That's a great idea!

Maybe, you could check out the forum here on AFF to find out where there might be a site you could publish it on or ask a moderator or someone else about it. I know there are lots of adds and some feature graphic stories so they might be familiar with them. If I find any, I will let you know.

UMMM HOW TO DICRIBE THIS STORY..... SO FAR "AWESOME LIKE YEAH!" read ya more latters!

oh I'm sure Rowan will be stuttering when he wakes up :P

Oh, this was good and filled with lots of hot yummy demon on mage smut. How dare those other demons try and get their filthy, smelly and slimy claws on Rowan! Thank all of the demons in Hell that Gaap saved his precious cherry ass, LOL. Oh, this part sounds ominous; The willing taking of his body meant that he had sealed his fate; he would share in Gaap’s power, and he would be connected to him for as long as he lived. I have a feeling things are going to be heating up even more between them and it will be hotter than Hell very soon.

Thanks for the fast update!

looking forward to more^^

Oh my gosh! I am addicted to Rowan and Gaap like chocolate, LOL. I don't think Rowan knows what he's gotten himself into nor does Gaap. I loved the transporting scene. I can see that Gaap is going to be very jealous and possessive of who looks at Rowan.

Great chapter, I loved it!

I like it, good start! A few awkward sentences here and there, but it's a gripping beginning! :)

All right! Second was also pretty nifty. I must say, I'm quite glad (and relieved) about the direction the story seems to be heading in. A drawn out chase goes a long way to keep up interest, and I like a plot that develops gradually. And Gaap is showing signs of a personality! Too many works, be they published or not, especially in the forced bonding and slavery categories, picture the aggressors in relationships as two dimensional, one-track minded, domineering s&m club member wannabes. Not that I have anything against s&m, but authors tend to picture their lives in sexual terms only, which makes the characters boring and unrealistic. Uh, sorry for the ramble. But, yeah, bottom line is: keep it up! ;)