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Cool that you still update! Please keep going on, it is a great story!

Take as much time as you need for the chapters. I like your in depth chapters, they're well crafted. I love how you portray Ant, all his emotions are so visceral, his confusion and his reactions to the training, the conditioning, it's believable. This was a great chapter, I liked seeing Klara, and the other side of slaves, the ones who are doing more than just coping. The interaction with Richard and Ant was hot and tension filled. I'm really curious to see where Ant goes from here, how he sorts out his feelings, and reconciles what just happened, since I don't expect him to just accept it so easily.

I read all 14 chapters today and I really enjoyed your story. I have a feeling that Ant will end up with Vitor.

Ah! Thank you so much for updating. I honestly don't mind that it takes a bit for you to update because every time you do it is excellent work. I am really happy there was a Richard-heavy chapter. I really love to hate that character, so todah! You are amaz-balls. Love love love love love you, and your beautiful story.

Wow, really happy you updated this, I was beginning to think it was dead. Feels like we're really getting into the meat of the story, now. I'm really intrigued how the conflict between Richard and Vito is going to play out. Keep up the good work!

I just found rec to this story today and ended up spending my whole sunday reading and rereading each chapter!I like it very much, the writing is very good, the characters interesting and plot original, in fact so original that I have no idea where you are going with this. I think Ant's reaction to the whole situation is well thought out, he is afraid, but still level headed and strong but without suspension of disbelief from the readers side. Having said that, I believe Peter is the one that interest me the most(because I am a masochist and often end up liking the secondary characters the most)would love to see more from him,I wonder about his "relationship" with Richard and if he resigned himself to his role or if he is still holding a hope for freedom, I also wonder why both him and, to a lesser extent, Richard are so interested in Anthony. Do you think you are going to explore characters like Richard or Vitor more?I am always interested in looking into the heads of psychopathsXD and you seem to have a good grasp pon the human psyche. I have many questions, but I will try to restrain myself!you could just maybe drop a little hint if you are aiming for more of a happy ending or tear inducing one??
Anyway, thank you so much for the amazing story, hope you will keep on writing

This kept me up late when I really should be sleeping, but I couldn't stop reading! Your way with words is so expressive, it feels sort of like watching a movie unfold in your head. I'm hyped to read the future updates!

Another update, I'm so happy!

I was kind of hoping Peter and Anthony would, err, get together at some point. I still don't really trust Peter, and Anthony shouldn't either, but his situation is still really sad. I wonder if he sees himself in Anthony and that's why he's trying to make "friends", but it also might've been Richard who told Peter to befriend him and encourage him to be more compliant (because that's basically why Peter's been doing). Maybe he thought Anthony was the type who'd respond best with the help of someone like Peter. Don't know yet, but I can say I liked their scene together, even if the premise is messed up. I wonder if Peter is gay, or if by now he just knows the moves or is beyond caring.

Vitor's rather frightening, though it seems unfair to blame Richard. Well, I guess for having slaves that are so undisciplined that they fight or whatever, but it was the guards that killed that other slave, and I don't think Richard would've approved of such potentially lethal punishment. Then again, maybe those guards are working directly for Richard, so that's also him not controlling his slave program. Vitor doesn't approve of the sex slaves, huh? Or maybe it's something else. I'm already dreading this arena fight, for Anthony's sake. Sounds disturbing and brutal, but I am guessing that they wouldn't let anyone die before they sell them? Unless they are uncontrollable or something. Hopefully Anthony can make it through without complaining or pissing off Vitor. Then again I love the drama in this story, so I don't totally mind if he does.

Thanks for the update!

I am so happy you are back! :D I love this story. I couldn't stop thinking about it. Thank you so much for the update, can't wait to see what happens next!

My eyes widened when I saw you had updated this! I'm so glad you did, I had been wondering what happened to Ant. I like that you did manage to get in a bit about the fighters, wondering if we'll see anymore of them. Interesting to see Richard flip-out, wonder if there is more to it than the dead boy.