rate_review Reviews

Please continue the story! I get so happy when I see it being updated- even if its only once in a long while.

Please keep this up. I couldn't read this earlier today, too busy, but when I saw this updated, I've been looking forward to it. Your characters are rich and realistic. And there's so many places to take this story. Feel free to email me if you need a soundboard. Whenever I hit writer's block or feel like I'm losing where I meant to be I think of a section forward in the story, sometimes its written, sometimes still in my head, but it's a part I am looking forward to, and I think, what makes sense to get from here to there, and I work on that.

Please dont abandon this story. *big puppy eyes* i've been a loyal fan from the very beginning! And i'm glad Ant still have rebellious fire in him after all he's been through so far.

I was so happy to see you updated! I don't mind waiting, this story is amazing! <3

I still do enjoy this story tremendously! But if you feel like you lost direction with it and want to regain the momentum, I think it's best you lean back for a second, ask yourself again where you originally wanted to take it and if thats still where you wanna take it. Maybe it would be wise to find an outline, sorta a thread again and then try to develop a rough plot for the rest of the story (and a goal) rather than continuing on aimlessly. Nothing makes a good story die more painfully then the author getting tangled up and the following loss of development and the central theme. That be said I definitely wanna (and will) read this to the end if given the chance! Thanks for updating.

Love this story! So glad you updated and the wait is worth it every time :) I'd love to see this story continued. I'll give you a little saying that we use to encourage people in China: 加油!

I'd love to see this continue and hope the spark of interest is relit but wouldn't ask you to continue just for the readers. You've got excellent writing mechanics, good characterization and coherent plot. I'll miss even slow updates. And be looking out for any fic of yours if this is abandoned. However, I do have one request. If you decide to stop adding chapters could you end with a rundown of what happened? If you have time and inclination. I'm vested and would love to know, even in skeleton form, how it ends. Thanks for sharing your talent.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING! I really like this story and I hope you can make it to the end. Please please update as soon as you can.

I would LOVE you to continue, but only do it if you are happy too. In my head I will 100% end up with Peter, Richard and Ant becoming a threesome before a twosome when Richard has a tragic death. So if you don't finish, that's how I'm going to imagine the ending :P

Oh wow, what an awesome surprise to see an update! I thought this one was completely abandoned, but thank you thank you for taking the time to give us another chapter! I would've never thought you felt you were losing direction, this chapter feels perfectly in line with the previous chapters. And I still love the unique and so well-developed setting, it seriously makes you want to know what happens next. I just love how scary and in control Richard is, he's such a great looming presence over Ant and even Peter. And with Peter apparently going full time in Rio, I wonder if there isn't hope that he can get a hold of himself and escape, or try to get help to save everyone? I really hope you can find your inspiration for this again because it's truly one of the best original stories on this site and had loads of potential. But I'm grateful to get an update even if I have to wait a long time. Thanks for the awesome story.