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I actually really enjoyed this chapter. It fit's really well although I feel bad for Ant. Good writing as always!

Oh me oh my, my dark side really loves this story. Your writing is so amazingly good, I get goose bumps because of how realistic it feels.anyways, just wanted to show my support! I've been reading this story in secret for a while, I re-read it all the time, check every day for an update, and it just feels so great when you update, because you never let us readers down! No matter how dark it gets, I always am 100% pleased with the chapters. Glad you are going on another trek, have fun, and I hope we get to see the next chapter before you go! I'm so hooked on this one right now! That last sex scene with Richard was so deliciously evil and realistic, it just made me want more. Haha, don't judge me too hard guys. Anyways, I really just wanted to remind you that there are lots of people like me, reading your story silently and happily waiting for new chapters. We can't wait for the next one! Thank you! Keep 'Em coming please! XD

Ack, amazing chapter, and also a very very tough place to leave off! I feel pretty bad for Peter, not that I blame Anthony for being freaked out and lashing out at him. I wonder if Peter is right, that Richard wouldn't have actually killed Anthony... but at any rate, he basically committed to "keeping" him since, as he said, Anthony can't be sold now. Makes you wonder if he did that on purpose for some reason, because you'd think they'd have loads of ways of punishing slaves that doesn't involve marking the skin, but who knows. Poor Anthony though, especially since this time he actually didn't do anything "wrong". I wonder if Hugo was punished or if they just decided Anthony was the ringleader, even though in fact it was Hugo who had the idea to see the jaguar. Hope they don't hurt him though! Anyway thanks for the update, it's always exciting to see you write more, and I very much hope we get another chapter soon!

Oh wow what did we do to deserve such an awesome update? Here I thought maybe the last chapter might be the last, instead, a super fast amazing new chapter! And for being so quick, this one had a lot of really great stuff in it. Maybe no shocking twists or anything, but it feels like the world is really being fleshed out. I guess it's good Ant's ribs aren't broken, but ouch nonetheless. I like the doctor, I can't quite decide if he's creepy or genuinely friendly... all things considered. Though I have to say, I definitely like Sauda. The way you introduced her with the jaguar was very convincing. You're awesome at writing villains, it's easy for villains to feel really forced and ultimately very cardboard, but Sauda especially had a lot of life breathed into her from the start, she's scary but kind of captivating, too. It's also hard to know quite what to make of her, and Ant and Hugo's situation - are they getting a short break from the terrors of the guards and Richard, or in worse trouble yet. Hugo is adorable, by the way, poor thing, I hope he's saved somehow! Well, Anthony too, but not quite yet, haha. Thanks again for the update! I so hope you continue to find inspiration! I'll just sit here trying to anticipate what happens next... like Richard discovering a totally drugged up Anthony...

Yayyy!!! An update!!! XD I got my wisdom teeth pulled out today. This update helps me feel better. Thank you!

I really liked this part. It was a nice break from Richard and now we know more about the place itself.

Thank you for the quick update. I'm very curious about where your story is leading. I sincerely hope and Ant will be OK eventually, as much as reality can allow, of course. I'll be waiting for your next update. who knows, maybe if you start writing it more frequently- your passion for the story and characters will be back and you'll have more ideas as for what do you want to happen next :)

Hey! This is the best story on the site right now! I hope you take some time to figure out the direction you want to go for it, but in the mean time-- please don't give up on it! I really enjoy it, I think it's talking about some really important stuff, and you're honestly just an incredible writer!!!!!!!!!!!

I've been following your story from the beginning, and was so happy when you updated! I'd love if you kept going, but not if your heart isn't in it. If you do continue, I'll definitely follow you until it's over. :) But, if you don't want to keep going, I agree with Ballardfam's suggestion of at least giving us some kind of run down of what happens, so us readers can get some closure with it. Once again, love the story, and I hope you get those creative juices flowing again! :)

Thank you so much for updating!!! Please keep going!!