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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, awesome to see another update! Wow, very menacing, that Richard. I feel bad for that other girl who tried to run, too. Wonder what will happen with Anthony, he seems to have made Richard's bad list! Thanks for the update, can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. This really made me scared. Poor Anthony. Richard seems truly interested in him. I only hope that he's not interested in just punishing him.
Update soon, please.
Update soon, please.
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March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I had to stop reading several times as I was too nervous too go on.
Of course he can't escape, that would make the whole story seem pointless.
So I guess as there is time to punish Ant for that stunt they will be their captives a bit longer and not sold right away, just moving places?
Ahh, I want to know what happens next! This is torture!
(But thanks for updating rather fast! ;) )
Of course he can't escape, that would make the whole story seem pointless.
So I guess as there is time to punish Ant for that stunt they will be their captives a bit longer and not sold right away, just moving places?
Ahh, I want to know what happens next! This is torture!
(But thanks for updating rather fast! ;) )
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March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I truly enjoy reading your story. It is great. Only chapters could be longer, since I can't wait to see what happens next! Please, update soon.
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March 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good and I can't wait to find out who bought Anthony, is it Richard or is he selling him?
If you haven't already I recommend that you check out this story written by an author here on AFF by the name of MaddoxGrey and the story is called Waiting in the Throes.
If you haven't already I recommend that you check out this story written by an author here on AFF by the name of MaddoxGrey and the story is called Waiting in the Throes.
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March 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your story! It's suspenseful :3
Somehow I get the feeling that this Richard guy wants Anthony for himself?
I hope you're keeping to fast updates (though I can understand a wait but I am soo excited to know what's happening! :D)
Somehow I get the feeling that this Richard guy wants Anthony for himself?
I hope you're keeping to fast updates (though I can understand a wait but I am soo excited to know what's happening! :D)
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March 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. I appreciate how you're setting up the scenario, and the unique detail you're putting into everything. I'm curious to know what happens to Anthony next! Thanks for writing, and giving us those updates so quickly.
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March 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this so far! I love the imagery and the story is very intriguing. I look forward to more!!
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Can't wait to read more!
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would like to have a description of what Anthony looks like, hair/eye color, height, weight, size, etc. I think I got that he's a Brit. I love these type of kidnap stories.