rate_review Reviews

Loving the story so far. Keep the chapters coming.

Herrow.
I belong to the anonymous readers and I wanted to hit you for thinking that the last chapter wasn't good. I almost wrote a review asking you how you could possibly stop at such a good part q.q

All in all, I just want to say that your writing style is very good and the story line is awesome. Many of us readers are kinda lazy and I dislike reviewing because of this stupid captcha and because I would always only write "Ahhh hoe good!" haha xDD

Hi! Very nice chapter. I liked how Kenan behaved when meeting Mikhail (was that his name? XD)! Cannot wair for more!

Alright, I have a few things.

First, it's probably not a good idea to assume that people aren't commenting because they don't like the chapter. It just kinda gets you down for no good reason. I loved your previous chapter (3), but I had nothing constructive to say, thus I didn't comment. See, not a nefarious reason for not commenting. Have a little more faith in yourself and your readers. :)

Second, I loved this chapter as well. You have a hell of a knack for pacing a story! It's neither too fast, nor too slow and you have great cliff-hanger placement. The flow is wonderful and is blended beautifully with Kenan's internal monologue. And that leads me to my next point, you have an amazing grasp of grammar, spelling, word choice and sentence structure. I am so in love with your story that it's not even funny.

Please don't stop writing! I can't wait to find out what else is happening to our confused hero!

I just left a review on FP when I saw you've post here too ! lol
Really great and thrilling ! Can't wait for more :)

Awesome start of story, can't wait for more.
I'm from Oklahoma and we're called green country for a reason. It's all trees, fields, lakes, plains, Indian tribes and farms. It's so boring. You probably would've been better off using another state. Don't get me wrong, I love the story so I'm gonna pretend my state is full of crime and alleys. I also like how your story flows.

Thank you for the fast update ! :)
I like cliché ! I don't know how you can do without...
Keep the good writing...

Oh my gosh! Someone in the police department must be working for the mob too and they somehow bugged Casey's home. Was it one of those detectives? Is Maddy, Kenan's baby sister? What exactly happened in Kenan's past to cause him this much trauma? I am very worried now for him and his sister. I hope they will be alright.

This is great ! I really like the first chapter ! More soon ?

Wow, what a fast updater. Thank you so, so much. Okay, now you got me interested about Kenan's past and how the caller knew so much about it! Update soon, please! :D