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April 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story, love the characters, cannot wait for more.
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, very pleased Sheridan and Eyre are getting a second chance to make a life together....and possibly have more babies!!
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April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Such a lovely story, the more I get into it, the more I like it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please update.
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March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait till you update again! :)
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March 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Love to see when Sheridan expresses his love for Eyre.
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March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The more I read of this story, the more I am intrigued by it, and the more I like it.
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March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I love your story so far :D
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March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, Ilike it for starters. I like the E. a lot. The way he looks and his silent ways. The awkward way Sherridan wooed him when they were kids ahahaha
I also like golden eyes even though I have no idea what larvae is.
What I don't like is how Robber story reminds me of the latest batman movie, and that there is no hint in the prison arc of the story about golden eyes. You might want to add that to the 'prison talk' chapters if your story will revive the old flames;)
And plz remove the sentences where the child 'hates' the father. Focus your story on intrigue, espionage, combat scenes, and wooing your mate...not about +child hates father+ cause it's a damper. at least for me.
Also you should find a beta for this. Youhave some grammar mistakes.
I hope you update during next week, I'm hungry to see golden eyes againa:D
I also like golden eyes even though I have no idea what larvae is.
What I don't like is how Robber story reminds me of the latest batman movie, and that there is no hint in the prison arc of the story about golden eyes. You might want to add that to the 'prison talk' chapters if your story will revive the old flames;)
And plz remove the sentences where the child 'hates' the father. Focus your story on intrigue, espionage, combat scenes, and wooing your mate...not about +child hates father+ cause it's a damper. at least for me.
Also you should find a beta for this. Youhave some grammar mistakes.
I hope you update during next week, I'm hungry to see golden eyes againa:D
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March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to when Eyre and Sheridan meet up again. There is so much love underlying their relationship that needs to be brought out and expressed. I definitely understand why the children would not easily accept a father they hardly know but hope ultimately all will work out and we have a family that grows closer. Great story, I love all your stories as a matter of fact.