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for The Auction.

by KerantliDreamer

person Louanne
schedule February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I 'm sorry but I will stop reading that story. You made your heroine Sabryann an annoying bitch, she snapped and lashed out at her sisters, she's jalous and a bit callous with them, that girl doesn't care that Emryn and Zinia don't love Farahad the bastard. And the way you made her the favourite, the first wife, it's so annoying ! So what, Zinia and Emryn don't deserve to know love ? Like I said before, Farahad didn't really care for them, and it's starting to seriously pisses me off, sorry for cursing.
person Louanne
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Okay, firstly, Sabryan is an annoying chit, I mean, you made her so perfect and the favourite of their futur husband. You know what I can't stand is that Farrahad seems to be gentle only towards her, and he doesn't care about the other two. If he loves so much his precious sabryan, why did he marry the other ? Why treating zinia and emrynn like shit ? it's absolutly not fair !!!! it's all about sabryann
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Agree with Louanne and why would he share her then, why would he share any of them if he was obsessed with them and watched them for so long trying to make them his
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is he bipolar or something first he's caring and then he'll act like a dick, and why weren't they more upset when they went to the party and were force to do all that with all those men, its suppose to be a marriage law and yet he's going to share them with other men like sex slaves
person meg
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it