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for The Statue

by DeadLetterOffice

person Anon
schedule June 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea what kind of plan thye are going to come up with to find Formosus. When they finally find out where he is, how the heck can they get him out of there without some sort of confrontation plus someone could get seriously hurt.
person Casper
schedule June 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you can string me along all you want and I won't fight ya as long as you continue to dish out chapters like this one.
person Talltree-san
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Formo on this I would not support parents who had me neutered like some damn dog! But like Tiro said you can't miss what you never had so what's the point. Hard to not slap Proteus upside his head for calling Formo old, I guess back in those days I would probably be considered an old hag and I'm 27 yrs. old lol!
person Jayden
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is really getting good! It's like the story is building up to something climatic. I love how you give us glimpses of what's going on from the different characters perspectives.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really becoming intrigued by who Formosus' new Master is and still don't know whether I like him or not. I loved the introduction of the other slaves and learning a little about their background like where they came from, etc. I cam trying to figure out in my mind how he can be rescued especially with guards standing outside the slaves quarters. I am off to work now, TGIF!
person khaleesi
schedule May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story and I love that it's a historical one. It's very interesting and I am learning a lot from reading it. Thanks!
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, brownie points for me for being the first reader to figure out that Narses was a eunuch! I dislike Proteus already but don't think he is evil just conceited for being the favorite with their Master out of the other boys. Although, I can see him trying to get Formosus into some sort of trouble so he will get punished. I loved the introduction of; Castor and Pollux, Priamos, India, and of course Bandak! I hope I didn't miss any one.

I always enjoy the dream/flashback sequences featuring Quintus because it means Formosus in not alone.

Now, I was hoping to see find out a certain very important other thing but can wait!
person snowleopard
schedule May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Morning! I was happy to see you had updated and excited that we might learn who was abducting Marcus to help get Formosus back! I really did enjoy this chapter with the introduction of the other slaves and was happy Formosus seems to be doing alright even though he's not too happy.

The other two stories which are my favorites along with yours; are A Passing of Seasons by HappyHarvests. She is writing the final epilogue chapter which should be posted on Friday and then will be writing the sequel to it after taking a well deserved break. The other story I am ready (well all her stories) are by 2rainsong2 (check out her website and Facebook page via links on her profile page) and the newest one is Sidney Submits (Book 1 of Hot Bottom Hostel series). She writes very hot BDSM stories. I loved the Honky Tonk trilogy along with the Apishipa Creek Chronicles. If you haven't read Rebel Yells, or Penny's Lane and Pappy Don't Preach, you are missing out on some heavy smut action. All her stories are awesome, and she has a long list of them.

Alright, please let us know soon what is happening with Marcus!
person snowleopard
schedule May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, I just saw another story I follow has been updated. It's called; Loathe thy Neighbor by Passhenette1 and is very good except updates are rare but well worth the long waits. She has another series out called the Carnalli Complex and just recently posted the third installment in the series called Carnalli Complex; Blood & Bonds. I love the Carnalli brothers!
person Casper
schedule May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Argh, I missed finding out the identity of 'you know who' and whether Marcus will try to get away from him and run to his father for help.

So, still on the topic of Marcus I was wondering whether he would forge an attachment to one of Formosus' new housemates and get into even more trouble, lol.

I just hope that 'you know who' gets to Formosus in time before Proteus gets him into trouble with their Master and something bad happens.