rate_review Reviews

I totally became a fan of this piece. I hope you do continue writing a plot for it. Like why was he there? Childhood back story? What made him return after all these years? Whats the future look like for them? Will it be consent and love later? As for grammar and paragraphing a lot of minor correcting and revising is needed even so its still good and I very much enjoyed it. Keep it up, I look forward to more and I hope you find someone beta ;)

Wow! That was good! It's really interesting, especially that we don't know what Keskah is thinking. It would be really awesome if you'd continue this! Loved it! :)

Delicious. Is this a oneshot or do we get more?

Fucking hell-that was brillAnt-loved loved loved it-it's been awhile since I've found a story that so pulled me in-I love this kinda story arc-please continue or I will be devestated-

That was great...hope you continue and give it life, on its way to being an intriguing story.

Awesome! There is so much you could build upon, I hope you continue!! loved the ending lol

I love Daemen as a character. He comes off as slightly cynical. Also, he doesn't come off as whiny which is 5 gold stars from me. Isn't anyone else sick of the same victim archetype? I also love even though his opponent is stronger than him he keeps fighting until the there is no way the battle could win. I hope he kinda keeps that in him.
Keskah is an asshole, so... good job in that. I really want to find out what his problem is. I mean he obviously has some feelings and can't express them like a normal human being. (really, can't message him on fb like, "hmu." haha.)
Kidding around aside, the writing style was extremely enjoyable. I love the pacing and small side notes. I can't wait to read more. If you don't write more however, I will be sad. VERY sad.

I really hope you continue this story! It was really good.

Noooo!! Please dont make a oneshot. I really like the plot and I would love to read more.
Great work
Le

Very interesting and fun! ^_^ Please continue it! ;)