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for Hells Whisper

by NallaAsh

person wolfluv
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OH HOLYCOW! WOW SO MUCH DRAMA IN JUST A FEW MINUTES! LOVED THE WHOLE HELL BABY DEAL THAT WAS FUNNY! DEMONS WOW WHO WOULD HAVE THUNK IT! 'ONLY YOU THAT'S WHO!" I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! OH AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! DRAMA AND A CLIFFY OH MY! read ya laters! oh and thanks for the shout out! Oh and does Dean have a thing for Aaron? I know I know I have to wait and read it but DAMN it's going to be killing me until then! But do it when you get a chance not because everyone is pressuring you to git r done! hee hee hee!
person Mona Thompson
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this fucking story! Sorry for the F-Bomb...I'm just excited! It is really good! I'm in love with Luke. What a little sweetie. If Will IS a Demon this just got really interesting! Not that it wasn't before...but the thought of throwing a Hott Demon in the mix is well...Hott! Can't wait for an update! You are doing an amazing job❤️
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A demon, huh? I like. A twist to the whole supernatural school scene (as far as I kniw at least). Hope you update soon I would like to see what is to come.
person luna_isis
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Keep up the great work!
person Nbsiren
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Luke is sooooooo not having a good day...I vote for Luke to beat Danny to a pulp to get it through his thick skull to leave him alone (that's just me though lol).
person Nbsiren
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
one and the same....my brain is trying to grasp what exactly that means...need more! :)
person wolfluv
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
DUNN DUN DUNNNN... The same as Dean WOW that is going to be one hell of a copulation! OH I kinda feel said for Danny but if he follows through with trying to get some and uses what that "person" gave him I have a feeling Luke won't be the one wooping his ass but Will only this time there won't be anyone there to stop him! DO the other brothers know what's happened to the youngest? Do they now what's going to happen Luke? I know I know I've got to read to find out and you know what I WILL! Like I've said before when you get a chance great until then read ya laters!
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer.


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person papu
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
what's wrong with a flowy pink dress and a lime green necklace, huh huh?
person JiminiC
schedule February 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh heck yes, please continue. Very interesting start.