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for Hells Whisper

by NallaAsh

person wolfluv
schedule February 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HOLY BAT POOP! WHAT THE "HELL" IS GOING TO HAPPEN NOW???? I can't wait to read and find out! read ya laters!
person Nbsiren
schedule February 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to the next chapter^^
person wolfluv
schedule February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WELL WELL WELL WHAT HAVE WE GOT GOING ON NOW? I GUESS WE'RE GOING TO FIND OUT WHO REALLY GETS LUKE IT ALMOST SEEMS LIKE ARRON WANTS HIM ALMOST AS MUCH AS WILL... UNLESS "DEAN" COMES AND BREAKS THINGS UP OR THE BOTTLE LUKE HAS BREAKS AND THEN.... SO ANYWHO LOVED IT! OH AND BY THE WAY AT THE TOP OF YOUR STORY YOU NEED TO WRITE " DISCLAIMER THIS STORY IS NOT RELATED TO ANYONE LIVING OR DEAD AND IS A WORK OF FICTION AND SHOULD NOT BE COPIED " READ YA LATERS!
person Nbsiren
schedule February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Dean will appear and stop them from ripping each other to shreds...
person Franz
schedule February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Aaron, Will is not right for him, Danny will be better .
schedule February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this =]
person JiminiC
schedule February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You have a lot of stuff going on in this story, not in a bad way of course. It is easy to get into the characters, I like how protective the brothers are of Luke. This story is certainly a fantasy, and fans of this genre are certainly able and willing to accept the twists and turns from your imaginative mind so I am still enjoying this and look forward to more.
person Nbsiren
schedule February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
lol one thing after another for this group :)
person Franz
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your writing very much. I would love that Danny has a chance to be together with Lucas. He is so funny and I think he really like Lucas.
person MissChaotic
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love your story and OH MY LAWD JESUS THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PUTTING KPOP IN HERE YOU'RE MY NEW FAVORITE PERSON! Aaahhh handsome t.o.p <3 and also seriously your story is really interesting keep up the good work!