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for Hells Whisper

by NallaAsh

person smint45
schedule May 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I just sumbeled on this story and read the whole thing!!!! It's absoloutly amazing!!!! I can't wait to see what new story will enfold after this!!!! I will definitly keep my eyes out for that one!!! I love the way you are writing an because of that I'm now going to read all your other storys^^ I'm glad you came back to post this last chapter since I otherwise would never have discoverd this story, I hope you are feeling better now!!!
person reader
schedule March 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me laugh and happy. I love the fact that raven gave them their cherries back. Love it! Can't for the next chapter.
person Nbsiren
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
lol^^ loved the last line :)
person Nbsiren
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
omg Aaron :(
person Jess
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Aaron & Jacob!
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HI!! I did see your review and have been trying to get here to read, just life got in the way there for a few! I'm reading now and will review as I go. Hugs!!
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Heading to chap two but so far I LOVE your characters! Luke and his brothers are all different and fun, the other characters are interesting and I love Danny already! On to two!
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the sexual tension, it just crackles and poor Luke! Damn he's cute as hell!! You are very good at ensembles and it's not easy for most writers to do. Having a large "cast" of characters and knowing where each one is, letting them have their own voice etc is hard and you are good at it! Love the story.
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HOLY HELL that was hot! DAMN! gotta go sit in the freezer for a minute. whew!
person reader
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Don't leave me in such a cliffhanger. I'm gonna be anxious for the next chapter.