rate_review Reviews

I really liked what you did and how you did it. I kind of wish there was more but any story that actually reaches its end should end. You did an excellent job, I'm glad you left some girls out of Anthony's conquests, that not only feels more real but emphasizes Sarah's importance to him (seeing as she is the ultimate moment that let's him let go of his time stopping power.)

It feels like a snapshot of our hero's life, a major moment but certainly not the whole story. I guess the thing is that the enemy, the time keepers, and Anthony's confrontation seems abrupt. It is such a slow build to reach them but then the fight is short and immediate.

I guess my review is boiling down to, please sir, I'd like some more. All in all, good work.

As to my favorite, Elisabeta is still my favorite girl but Jennifer's is my favorite chapter.

You have been an update machine. Congrats on the good work. I have to say I like Anthony's time stopping powers but don't particularly care for the rest. Having antagonists who just want time to work properly, monitors against this new abuse, is definitely the way to go. I like that Anthony wants to do the right thing but really hope he doesn't. I'm curious to see where you plan to take it. If Anthony negligently destroys all of creation in search of sex and friendship, I'd be cheering all the while.

I'm kind of glad he passed on Ophelia off the bat but I would be happy to see her again.

Do you know what the best part about Anthony is? He can't keep a secret. He wants to connect with all of these interesting girls so badly that he flops his superpower on the table like it was a giant penis the moment he needs any help pushing the conversation forward. It humanizes him and makes him feel properly adolescent. He's got one move. So when he doesn't need to use his power it's particularly strong.

I liked Samantha's chapter a lot. We haven't seen much of the wild child since Jennifer and as it's a big part of who Anthony was and who Anthony wants to be it improved the story to see it. I'm very glad Christmas break is over. There's a hunting ground feeling too the high school setting that makes Anthony better. Especially with Nora's boyfriend playing the competing predator. To overextend a metaphor.

Another chapter, a great one actually. I find myself liking Tamara quite a bit, especially her actions vs Letisha. I'm used to the idea that sex is about the emotion, the friendship and the closeness without the possessiveness. That theme seems like it could be missing out on some subplots or fallout, but because it's consistent and because it's done with intent, it really acts as a solid backbone for the story.

I like that you have girls you are saving for later and new girls you're still introducing. There have been rumors of Anthony's wild child days, but until Samantha we haven't seen anyone who had been carrying a grudge over it.

I'm curious about the girls already visited and the girls yet to come. More and more, I'm interested in Anthony's growth than the consequences and peculiarities of his powers. My favorite moment has been when he acted like a jerk to the girl at the pool after Natalie. Yet I love everything he does with the time stopping. The visual of the arrested shower droplets was cool.

But it's the girls I keep returning for. I look forward to more conversations with Jennifer and Eve, continued sparring with Elizabeta, the eventual inclusion of Jordan, perhaps forming the kind of connection he seems to seek out with Natalie and what the new girls will be like. The thing is I like every girl so far, which is nearly impossible in a harem story. I'm not going to make any recommendations or entreaties because you seem to have a plan and I like it.

I'm glad to see you're still writing and improving. I look forward to you next chapter.

I really like both sides of this chapter. It does feel that Christmas and New Year's are missed opportunities. How many teenaged girls that just lost their virginities to a bit they were still very friendly with wouldn't at least try to celebrate a little bit over the holidays. Latisha really intrigues me now, I hope Anthony befriends her with his penis.

I really like your story man. I can see visible improvement in your writing as it goes on.

Your writing is noticeably improving as you go. I quite liked Sofia's surrender, it was well piloted the fact that it's the confidence and not the superpowers that get the girl is a better path to follow.

I'm curious if Anthony's mental insistence that these encounters are shared between friends is infectious and what's keeping any of the women he is with from expecting, imagining, or seeking more than he's offering. That all the women have been riding their post orgasmic high for weeks without periods of insecurity or disbelief is the most unreal moment in a story about stopping time.

I'm not suggesting you follow up on my questions, there's a compelling innocence to Time for School that could easily be lost by dwelling on the pessimistic. This innocence is particularly why I like the over flowery romance novel euphemisms. I tend to use harsher language in my own work but I'm not writing uplifting hopeful stories.

I'm looking forward to Elisabeta's chapter, while part of me looks forward to funding out you're misleading us to build more tension between Anthony and my favorite of his girls.

Whatever you decide, I'll be there to read it.

Dude one of the best stories I've read wheres the rest?

Time For School is a wonderful story. The actors are deeply developed and fully believable. The plot has wonderful twists and turns you never know who is going to be next and where it will happen. This is one of my two favorite stories on this site. I check for new chapters several times a day. Please keep writing GREAT Stories like this. THX

Hey, wow, two chapters since I last checked! Today is a great day.

You keep proving yourself as a writer and storyteller and I'm happy to watch you continue and, I'm thrilled to say, improve.

I have only really had one moment of doubt in how you executed anything. It is in Ms Adanna's acquiescence (Kudos on keeping her called Ms Adanna throughout the scene, most hot for teacher scenes have that moment where the teacher asks to be called by her given name irrevocably changing the balance in their friendship.) When Ms Adanna's first reaction was "no, I'm a teacher." I was quite pleased. Her rapid turnaround felt a little too quick. I feel it may have served better if time had restarted after the no until perhaps she caught his eye a few minutes later in the class, giving a discreet nod or gesture and then returning to the timeless world, would be better. Still, this is your story and it is coming along brilliantly and I'm looking forward to more of everything you do. Keep writing and definitely trust yourself because you're doing great.

You have many beautiful girls to get to and a half a dozen to keep happy. A daunting task for the best of us, good luck.

Another chapter! An excellent addition as well. I'm glad to see that Anthony is having at least some girl trouble. Running into his own cockiness was an excellent means of character development. And there's still the other side of things. I'm very interested to see what happens when the girl he seduces becomes much more emotionally invested than he may be. I feel Sofia out Nora might be a good candidate for that. However you decide to take things, I'll be reading.

PS where's Elizabeta?! Her disappearance will make the next wait before an update feel like forever. Great job!