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April 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I love the way you pull the reader in with just a few sentences. I also liked how you shared only little flashes of the characters lifes and still managed to give a complete picture that leaves strong emotions. I'm impressed.
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January 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. It was nice and angsty, well written, and it was mostly believable. The only part I didn't quite love was the fact that he couldn't find anyone else attractive even. But, he is your character. I would be thrilled to see you elaborate on this. Great work..