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by Talena_Mae

person Anon
schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When you address the name of a person in dialogue, you need to add a comma. Example: "Already done, Captain." Otherwise, if it's written like this, "Already done Captain" it makes me think the person talking "done in" the captain.

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