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for Does It Matter?

by Overlordpotatoe

person Emory
schedule April 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. I like the dynamics between Dara and the prince. I wonder though will Dara ever be able to get his full powers back? Will you also explain what exactly happened that caused him to lose his powers?
person smint45
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was such a sweet and fluffy chapter^^ Thanks a lot for posting.
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another update. It was nice to see the further development of Maric and Dara's relationship. I enjoy how Maric truly doesn't seem to think that some of his words or actions would make someone else feel awkward. I'm also glad to see that Bug will be taken care of and can't wait for the punishments to start! Thanks again for continuing to write and post.

lunamist
person Nbsiren
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to seeing the punishment, glad to see Bug placed with someone that will care for him, happy to see Dara is ok...for now at least^^
person Wolfwitch
schedule March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Actually it makes it even better that you've put that much thought into your various worlds! I do like this story a lot. Poor little Bug! I hope that he gets all the TLC he deserves, now! And Nolan deserves to die slowly, painfully and publicly! Slave rights revolution!
person guilty_pleasure
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dara!! Be strong! Hope Maric would take Bug away from Lord Nolan! And I hope that Lord Nolan will experience the pain he inflicted to his slave! I became curious about the king. Does he have to do anything with the " event" which caused Dara to lose his abilities? Waiting for updates:)
person smint45
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god poor Dara!!! Hope he will be alright and that that ass Nolan gets his punishment!!!! See you again soon!!!!
person Ciara_D
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Maric and Dara, *cries*, he just keeps getting hurt. I hope there's a happy ending in store for Bug to. He deserves it.
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the story more and more with each chapter. I hope to read more soon and also hope Lord Nolan is subjected to some kind of torture. Maybe he could be turned into someone else's slave. Thanks for updating and continuing.

lunamimst
person E.J
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really good story so far, keep it up!