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for Wolves Part I: Petr & Evan

by Laevi

person kylee123
schedule January 19, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Great story.  So happy to see that Lin and Lon are together. They are too close to ever be apart and I am glad it was just a dream in this universe and that they never separated.  Hurray!

Love the story of Petr and Evan. I am glad that they found each other.  Evan was a virgin but he definitely is not shy. I laughed at the fact that he was actually willing to do a public demonstration at the club.  So crazy!  He was truly hiding his real personality in Russia. 

As always I love your writing and one the things I enjoy most is the different styles of speaking that each character has.  I can definitely see the difference between Evan's Russian accent and the local style of speaking.

I dont know the back story of Kat so I dont know what he did in the past.  I feel sorry that Lin dealt with him so harshly.  Obviously he still had feelings for Petr or he would not have come back to see him.  Since no one liked him, he definitely must have made some enemies when he was together with Petr.   Very happy to see the Wolves in full force. 

 

person jamie
schedule May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hot damn love the story
person Franz
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you are back with writing. I love your stories, from the wolves I like the most about Major and Tommy. Could you please someday write more about them, after they married ? I am waiting too for more of your stories. Thank you very much !!!!