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for Frayed Ties

by Overlordpotatoe

person bambi4real
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm still reading and enjoying this story. Sorry if I didn't review or rate last ch. I hope Danya gets more training in offensive magic. it would really up the game the next time they come across vampires. Also glad to see they finally got some cuddle time in.
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter with the introduction of a new atmosphere for Simon and Danya. I'm glad Danya finally got some cuddling and that Simon has finally been schooled on what is needed. Lets hope that the little bug Danya put in his ear about not minding more intimate behavior during the night takes hold :-)

lunamist
person QueenAyame109
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter~ It made me so happy I can't even... I don't have much to say this time other than yay! an update and I love love loved this chapter!! Keep up the good work~ and I hope to see an update soon.
person Castris
schedule March 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I love how Simon and Danya are finally interacting! It was hilarious when Simon found out that he was "neglecting" Danya, lol.
person amothepirate
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
How have I never seen this story on here before? It's quite wonderful!! I am definitely looking forward to your updates!
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love how you portray Simon's character. So many times we think we know what is right and can't see past our own internal moral code to see that what we view as correct behavior isn't really what the other person needs at all. That, I think, is a very difficult lesson in life to learn.

Thanks for the update. I hope we get another soon and that Danya gets some much deserved cuddling even sooner.

lunamist
person Chibikodo
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh Danya you poor thing. i'm surprised Simon actually listened for once, but I'm glad he did and I hope he'll pull his head out of his butt and at least give Danya a hug.

I'm sure this town will be where Danya gets to make use of his shield.

Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person balniz
schedule March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh I missed Ur fic so much! I'm so happy for the update !! Poor danya he can get his thoughts trow with Simon and he gets to see cailan with he's master, I'm really curious when and who he's gonna snap out of his stubbornes I hope something not to tragic...well I will go back to my corner until the next update oh and I'm gonna check your tumblr so I know when the next update
schedule March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update and finally, some leeway on this whole ordeal. They're not exactly at a stalemate anymore, we got some progress. I love how ironic it is that Simon is concerned about slave well being and that makes him seem open minded, but (how I see it) he's really closeminded in keeping his ways the same and what HE believes is right and wrong for everyone, constructing a world around him to make it fit his beliefs. Maybe I'm reading too much into this (lol) but I love how much time and depth you've put into this story and I absolutely love it. I cannot wait until you update next!!
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well I just read all eight chapters in one sitting. I love your world building, I want to know more about the world they live in, the mage vs human war and when the vampires came into it. This is such a great story can't wait to see more.