rate_review Reviews

Pretty sure I've never reviewed this story so I figure it's about time I did. Anyway, it's quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. I remember reading your story Hey Jude back when it was first being posted on Fictionpress some many, many years ago, so I figured I'd check this out, as I tend to steer clear of slave stories since most usually share one main point- that of them being raped (generally excessively) or beaten (again, generally excessively), or where the main character (slave) has gone through some sort of previous trauma before the story began, all of which really isn't my cup of tea. I'm also keen of this story's dynamics, and that it's consistent. Like, Simon, for instance. Despite being ignorant of the ways of mages. And that they're not just super quick to jump into bed together. Not that I'm not waiting for it, just like a bit of build-up, you know?

Anyway, thought I'd let you know, and hopefully placate you that you still have readers (im)patiently waiting for the next chapter! (Seriously, though, take as long as you need to continue making your story as interesting as it is!)

Wonderful story! Keep up the great work.

woot about time Simon got the clue in for the physical touch Danya needs^^

Thank your for updating! I love this story already and can't wai to read more!

I am way too tired to write anything but SQUEEEEEEEEE, OMGOMGOMGOMG, so much love, Simon is so cute cuddling Dayna. But he'd had better feel freaking guilty for letting the poor man suffer for so long!

I'm glad you're feeling better! And this chapter, sigh....relief. Finally. Really liked Simon in this one! And Danye, defending him, beautiful. He didn't even think about hiding his secret. Grins* Simon's taking everything really well.

Finally!! Danya got his most awaited cuddle while sleeping with Simon :) I am hoping to see some development between the two, now that Danya's abilities are out in the open. I'm looking forward to your updates

That was fantastic!!! Now everything is finally out in the open^^I wonder if the other soldiers will train danya^^would be nice!!! I loved teh scene with danya protectimg simon^^his shild work quite well^^ And I love simons reation^^that was really nice!!! See you again soon!!!!

No tears this time, but still a good chapter. You are very talented, and I enjoy your work. (I haven't reviewed the last couple of chapters on your other story, but that's because I'm usually reading on my ipod, and it's a serious pain to review on that. So far, both stories are excellent.) I didn't see this last plot turn coming, and that always makes a story more enjoyable for me. Great work.

Still here and still reading, and enjoying!

Oh, you might want to put up the link for your tumblr page under the name of potatoewrites because the link on your author profile page is not the one with the pictures!