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I'm so glad you are back!!!! This was fantastic!!!! Can't wait to see some more magic^^ see you soon !!!!!

Thanks for the new chapter it's great.

Ah . . . 2 steps forward, 3 steps back for poor Danya. At least now Simon is conceptually getting it, now if we can just get him to dump some of his more "pesky" morals and give our little mage what he truly wants and needs. Who knows, maybe a bit more intimacy will light an even bigger fire under Danya's mage abilities. Thanks so much for the update. As always, I look forward to reading more.

lunamist

This is such a good story I love it. Can't wait to read more!

I don't know about the past reviewers, but I'm new... so please update soon! I'm hooked by the jaw and it's going to be a painful release. (Lol I dunno what the hell that means, but must be good right) anywho, seriously this is such a pleasure to read and I just love Danya's and Simon's relationship, I think the timing is perfect in their growth, tho I'm sad his free... (am I a terrible human being for saying I want him to remains simon's slave? You've corrupted my mind -_-. Thank so much for telling us Danya's story (I hope I'm typing the right name lol I feel like I'm not.)

Great chapter more and more interactions between Simon and danya I love it that awkward moment when Simon asked do you want to sleep with me? Hahaha I hope little by little there will be more development~~ waiting eagerly to the next chapter! !

I'm quite surprised by jow little resistance Simon puts up and how quickly he decides to join up with the ragtag group of escaped mages. Certainly his beliefs are in line with theirs but I don't know if In a similar circumstance I would so readily join... Though there was certainly the prospect of certain death for the two of them and Simon didn't want Danya to die. How are the soldiers under Simon's command going to teact when they find out Simon and his mage are missing... Or is the plan to have Simon and Danya rejoin the soldiers and work from the inside to free the mages? Hm

I am so happy for Danya now he can have Simon all to him self, lol it was a great read, oh and I love how u are taking ur time with the story, since most story just get right into the action I like that u are not doing that u are allowing Danya and Simon to know each other before they start a relationship. So happy I can't wait for the next chaper. This story reminded of this one story I read on my phone it's call "Measure of Devotion" you should read it if u have time there are three books to this story,it's a great story like yours.

WELL IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME SOMEONE MADE SIMON UNDERSTAND! But Danya's got some fault there too. I hope he'll be able to get his book, I hope the little group that have them don't get wiped out by the king vampire either! I just got done reading this from start to now and I've totally enjoyed it so far! I guess I didn't really want to read it at first because it lacked something that I cannot put my finger on, something in the description I don't know but I'm glad that I finally decided to read it and I'm mad that I didn't start sooner! I hope to read more soon though! Update when you can and thank YOU for updating what you have! read ya laters!

it is a good start but Simon still needs a swift kick to the bee-hind and a whack to the head....to wake up to love!!