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by Overlordpotatoe

person Anon
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Happy to see an update. I'm worried about them going back to the human camp, but I hope Lucus finds himself a bit of muscled action :-)

lunamist
person flutterbye
schedule August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really love your story! Started reading last night, and caught up just now. Magic plus slaves is pretty much the perfect combination for me.
I really like Danya - he's a change from the frightened cringing slave boy (although I do love that kind too). So bold and intelligent. I like Simon too, for all the flaws he has. But they may have sometimng of a tough job working out the kinks in their relationship? At least, it seems that way to me.
Thank you for writing, and hope life's good for you! Please update soon, if you can :)
person zas
schedule August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the great read and hope to see you back soon
person smint45
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was amazing and soooooo HOT!!!!! I really love this story!!! The magic training was exciting!!1 Huoe to see some more training and smutt in the next chapter!!!!
person Ciara_D
schedule August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So enjoying this story. Thanks for continuing to update.
person staar
schedule August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a nice surprise to see that you updated !!!!! I had thought that you had so forgotten this.....So bad of you to make me wait so long for an update ...but your forgiven this was just so hot !!!!!!! Finally they are almost all together...BTW thank you again for the update......hope to see you sooner than later ok......loving this !!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nbsiren
schedule August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Woot! about time :D
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh so happy to see an update on this story and very glad to see Danya and Simon's relationship developing. Thanks for continuing and I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work :-)

lunamist
person staar
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I started reading your story in Aarins but here you have more done...let me tell you that I love it.....Hpw you have them both going slow into all of it is wonderful !!!!! they are so cute together !!! I love Lucus also ....Hope to see an update soon :):):)
person Arbitrary Doom
schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Can't wait to see where it goes next.