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Love this! It has so much potential! I love how danya isn't this submissive broken slave. He knows what he wants!

Oh my that was fantastic^^I so can't wait to see what happens when simon finds out that he can use fire magic^^Probably will really help to like Danya more^^Hope that happens soon^^I liked simon a lot before he new danya was his slave^^Can't wait for more hope you update soon!!!!

I enjoyed Danya's and Lord Bell's first meeting very much. Lord Bell is definitely a grump but I think that will change over time as he and Danya get more personally acquainted. I was just as nervous as Danya was when he approached him with that hunting knife and breathed a sigh of relief that he was just removing the collar around Danya's neck. I find Hamish to be very interesting. I am anxious about their visit to Lainton and the threat with the Vampires! Great chapter! I hope Danya doesn't try to escape and get caught because I don't know how Lord Bell will react and how Danya would be punished.

looking forward to more^^

i am so excited for this! i would love to read more! :)

That was a really interesting start so far^^ I'd like to see more of this^^ see you soon!!!

Great start! I really enjoyed reading the first chapter to this story and it's very well written too. I can't wait for Danya to meet Lord Bell for the first time and see what happens and how he reacts to his new slave. Lord Bell seems to be very mysterious and having the capability to push the Vampires out of Stowley makes him even more interesting. I do like Baine and hope we see more of him.

A truly fascinating beginning. I'm sure I'm not as anxious as Danya to meet this new master. But I AM anxious!

wow, I like that a lot, love this genre of story and cannot wait to read on.....really interesting story.

Really interesting start. Please update quickly!!