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by Overlordpotatoe

schedule January 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Sorry for not responding yet!

You can email me at fenrirsboy@aol.com!

I am enjoying the progression of this story! Would love to know more about Hamish and Simon's background together…. are they friends? Comrades? Is there an age difference? I've been imagining that Simon is a bit older, but I don't know if I'm imagining that or if you mentioned it somewhere….

Anyway, please feel free to email me!

person NallaAsh
schedule January 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! There has to be mo~re! I love this... I'm like completely addicted to this and it just ended. my life, it shall not be complete until I read more!
person smint45
schedule January 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god thi was so amazing^^ I adored all the magic^^ Thank you so much^^ I so love how this story develops!!!! And I'm so proud of him killing the vamps^^ Fantastic!!!! I think Simon will really like it when he learns of his little slaves fire magic skills!!!! Maybe he will even train him^^ So can't wait^^ Please update really soon!!! I adore this story!!!!
person Rachel
schedule January 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! thank you:)
person Nbsiren
schedule January 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hehe good chapter^^
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think Danya misunderstood the conversation he overheard between Simon and Hamish. I don't think they would kill him but then again Hamish did hold a knife to his throat but I think that was because they thought Danya was a threat and was planning to kill Simon. I was worried the vampires were going to take Danya but then again if they did would Simon have gone after them to rescue his slave or just let them have him? Thanks for updating!
schedule January 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story.. i'm patiently waiting forthe time that simon will warm up to danya. i'm really looking forward to some cuddling. ;)
person Chibikodo
schedule January 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! I don't mnow whether to consider Danua brave or extremely foolish. So the innkeeper allowed the campires in because he didn't like mages??

I'm looking forward to reading more anout Danya's magic and these strangers he's traveling with, one of whom is his new master.
person Rachel
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please update!!!>.<
person happigal
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Only three chapters in and I already know I am going to be following. Great story!