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by Overlordpotatoe

person cindy
schedule February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I love the pace you're moving things along between them, slowly and surely, to do a proper thorough job. I'm savouring every bit :) My only complaint is that you dont update fast enough! WRITE PLEASE!!!
person zas
schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story it is well put together, I can't wait to see what happen next between those two, oh I have a question when will they start havering sex.
schedule February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I can't wait to see what is in the magic book~ I honestly have a very strong desire to see Danya be all badass in battle, which I hope will happen, I wanna see his inner warrior come out. I really do love this story and greatly look forward to reading more. Also, thanks for replying to my review!! :D
person Castris
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, chapter six was so nice. I love how they're interacting now. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Smint45
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was fantastic!!!! I really hope Danya will not get ill or anything without close contact^^ and so can't wait for the magic you promised^^ I love that he got a fight in robe that tells me at some point simon will get to know that he can fight!!!! Hope to see you again soon!!!!
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love where this is going!
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop a note to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. When I see an update, I'm excited and read it directly. The length of the chapters is nice as well - not too long to seem cumbersome and yet long enough to feel satisfied. Thanks so much for writing and posting. I look forward to the next chapter!

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person Pagan
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've been following your story since you posted the first chapter, and just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying it.
person Nbsiren
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter^^
person Kinsfang
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love the flow of your writing style. I'm really enjoying this story and I'm really looking forward to seeing where it goes. Please keep up the awesome work. ;D