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for Frayed Ties

by Overlordpotatoe

person Batzy
schedule September 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I really hope you haven't forgotten about this! It's been a while and it's something that I think about on occasion- I'd love to see how it ends!

person smint45
schedule August 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was amazing!!!! The next chapter will have one of my favorite scenes!!!! I can't wait!!!! See you soon!!!!

person smint45
schedule August 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great new chapter!!! I so can't wait for my favorites scenes to come!!! See you!!!

person smint45
schedule July 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really like this rewrite so far!!!! We get to see a lot morte details in this version than in the first one!!!! Although I really loved the first version a lot!!!! I hope you keep writng this time and don't abandon this stoy halfway through like the last time!!!! Hope to see you again soon!!!

schedule July 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wondering if you had just disappeared, looking forward to this re-write. Honestly, can't remember too much about this from before, just remembered I was in love with this and Does It Matter.

I do think you've changed the time though, post apocalyptic, putting in modern cars.

Can't wait to see where you take this, good luck writing!

person smint45
schedule December 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I just reread this story and I still really really love this!!!! I'm wondering if you will contiune this story though.... It would make me sad to see this story ending up as another great story beeing abandond. I really hope that you will update this again!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!

person kylee
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Very good writing. Thanks for sharing it with us. Hope to see a new chapter soon.
person MizuAz
schedule January 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What a fun slave fic! I've read plenty slave/abuse stories that get a bit carried away with the pain infliction aspect, so it's a relief to have something that's focused more on rescue/comfort/fixing the situation. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for writing!
person Lime
schedule January 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I stumbled on this story this latw. It's AMAZING. I love Simon's and Danya's realtionship and all this magic stuff and slavery freedom is just really interesting. Really hope you uploas soon.
person smint45
schedule January 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the latest chapter^^ Had to read the whole story again since its been so long since you last updated!!! Not much magic in this one but i liked it non the less^^ Simons jalousy is really quite endearing!!! And the oil lets me hope for more smutt to come^^ Hope to see more magic soon too^^ Thanks a lot for the update and I hope the wait for the next chapter will not bee quite as long!!! See you again soon!!!