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for Treat Me Nicely

by Tristram

person bambi4real
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
always a treat to get a new chapter from you. I am glad he got such a nice Val day from E. It was hot!
person x
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just as an FYI, the word is taut, not taunt, but intriguing story so far.
person Ishtani
schedule February 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am completely in love with this already. The dynamic between the two is fascinating and dramatic on the best of ways. I feel like it's pretty obvious that Van is emotionally invested in Tim in a big way, he's just a reserved person. I wouldn't be surprised if he thought that they were in a relationship and that Tim disregarding him in someway. I feel like I hope it will end in a different way than it does. Which is brilliant and it definitely has my attention
person wolfluv
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
totally loving this story! I'll take whatever you can give when it comes to future chapters! I'll send you my email so I can get updates! read ya laters!
person bambi4real
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. Can't wait to see how Van handles the competition.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Me thinks that Van might be slightly 'jealous' of Tim's school project partner. I am kind of confused where this story might be going in regards to who Tim ends up with and don't think this story will end up being a threesome. I am thinking maybe later Dane gets Van to see Tim for the unique person he is instead of just taking him for granted. I kind of do want Tim to stay with Van but like Zane too. See you at next update, Katie.
person RitsuOuO
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo enjoying this story, thank you. I look forward to the next chapter!
person NallaAsh
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this. thanks a lot!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good start! I am totally enthralled by this sequel and have a feeling that Van, Tim and Dane will have a rocky road ahead of them.
person wolfluv
schedule January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME SO FAR! I look forward to reading more! read ya laters!