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I want to scream because it's so ovious Van is in love with him --it's just he has trouble to comunicate his feelings-- and yet Team doesn't get it and they are pulling apart and yeah.

 

 

Continue please!

I just found this story this morning and even though I was a little confused at first, I started liking it. Van needs to befriend some of the other students. I know he's in pain, but he's closed off from others. It's been a while since you updated. I'd really like to know what happens.

Thank u for update.Its much better than My lovely enemy.

I have to admit I am just as baffled by Van as the rest of the student body. He acts possessive one moment and then wusses out the next. Not sure what he plans for Tim or if he has plans for Tim. It could all be because he is jealous of his developing relationship but it just seems pretty schizophrenic. So glad you got another ch up.

How long will it take Tim to realize Van found his letter? WILL he go with the guys and try to have a good time? Or will he go out not realizing he'll end up at their meeting place anyway? Will Van ever truly tell Tim how he feels? OR will Tim ever tell Van how HE really feels? I feel at some points that Van really does take Tim for granted and just from the conversation that they had over lunch REALLY made that stand out but him getting home and Van almost having a hissy fit over the letter but stopping himself and not bringing it up but saying or at least tell Tim to go have fun was unexpected but maybe he's growing up too and wants Tim to make friends as well or maybe he's dying and doesn't want to tell Tim GOD that would suck! But I want Van to realize how much he actually takes Tim for granted though! BUT I want Tim to realize it's okay not to play MOM all the time or I should say WIFE all the time he needs to get a back bone and stop just second guessing himself and Van but I know that will hopefully come in the next chapters. Thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!

Awww I love this story so so much! I absolutely love the tension between our 2 boys. Your writing is superb and I just love the "unspoken" words between the two. Eagerly waiting for more. Thanks!

I have read all of the available chapters. And so far I really like what you got here :) !

I almost thought Van was using his disability as a form of hold on Tim but now I'm not so sure... I mean he could be using it to a point to keep Tim with him there are times when I feel like Tim is an enabler in an abusive relationship even though there is no hitting involved just emotional black mail of a sort. I guess I'll just have to keep reading to understand more of their relationship. thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!

Love the chapter. Was so excited when I saw a new chapter. Am so happy with all smut. Is so great.

I wonder what brought that on? Was it the fact he was talking to another guy... or maybe because it was stress... or maybe because it was Valentines Day what ever the case I still feel like Tim is just being used and I think someday Tim is gong to have a nervous breakdown and end up in the hospital. I am hoping Van isn't just all about himself. Not with the way Tim feels about him. I guess I'm just hoping Tim gets what he needs in the end.