rate_review Reviews

Cant wait for chapter two

Hm.... Seems like it could easily get quite dark. This is not an objection; I like dark stories more than I like light-hearted stories, usually.

So in this first chapter, you've laid out a little bit of the world you're working in, plus started to flesh out a few characters. I like it, and the mafia nuances you've thrown in help reveal details about both the world and some of the characters.

It's a good start; I'm looking forward to reading more, discovering more.

May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

So interesting, need more.

Good start of stories, I totally love Mafia stories.